Cute, sweet, fun, smoothly written - and hot, of course.
Karen goes from reluctant to full-blown domme rather fast, but it's an erotic short story, I wasn't exactly looking for in-depth character development here. I liked how the author showed the caring, emotional side of the power-exchange. Looking forward to part #2.
Some typos (yeah, nitpicky nitpick, and I know my English spelling sucks. But looking for errors is my job, okay ;) )